Tracked rewrite cohort
+58 average VANTAGE-7 points
The average score-point gain recorded across KINETK's internally tracked resume-rewrite cohort.
Real client work
Resume before-and-after examples and ATS score results.
The examples below show the actual writing and structural changes. Personal information is protected. Each case explains the positioning problem, the work completed, and a supporting document score. The tracked client outcomes are reported separately from the 6 public cases.
Tracked client outcomes
Resume score gains and interview outcomes.
KINETK records document-score movement and reported interview outcomes for completed client work. The 2 tracked cohorts below are separate from the 6 public before-and-after examples on this page.
Tracked outcome cohort
94% reported an interview
94% of clients in KINETK's tracked outcome cohort reported at least 1 interview within 30 days.
Public proof
6 complete comparisons
The public cases below show the source document, rewritten document, score change, and main writing fixes.
Method note: +58 and 94% are first-party figures from KINETK's internal client tracking and use the cohort definitions recorded with those results. VANTAGE-7 is KINETK's document diagnostic. Client-reported outcomes and diagnostic scores do not promise an interview, offer, or other hiring result.
6 resume rewrites
Before-and-after client documents.
Furqan A.
Finance and AI automation engineering
Before42toAfter89
Changed the target from a generic accounting story to an AI automation engineering story supported by SAP BTP, Python, and RPA experience.
- Targeted headline
- Relevant technical language
- Scoped impact statements
Karen S.
Customer service and pet care operations
Before22toAfter90
Built a target summary and experience descriptions around customer service, veterinary support, scheduling, and client care.
- New summary
- Experience bullets for each role
- Clearer service and operations language
Steven K.
Software engineering, HPC, and fintech
Before68toAfter85
Moved CUDA and GPU performance work into the opening story and connected it to low-latency and financial engineering targets.
- CUDA and GPU expertise made prominent
- HPC and finance context
- Tighter performance-at-scale bullets
Mia C.
Government operations and program coordination
Before28toAfter72
Corrected the opening title to Program Leader II and rewrote task-based bullets around outcomes, coordination, and public-sector responsibilities.
- Accurate role positioning
- Outcome-focused bullets
- Government operations context
Kelley B.
Sales operations
Before44toAfter91
Translated an internal title into clear sales operations language and made Salesforce, CRM, and revenue operations experience visible.
- Externally readable title
- Salesforce and CRM proof
- Transferable impact language
Matt D.
Business operations and analytics leadership
Before54toAfter91
Resolved a title inconsistency and brought $62M budget ownership, AI and machine learning work, and analytics leadership into the first scan.
- Consistent title
- Budget ownership near the top
- Analytics leadership made explicit
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Public LinkedIn recommendations
What clients wrote about working with Mark.
These recommendations were posted publicly on LinkedIn. Follow each profile link or view the recommendation collection.
"He distilled a large amount of information into clear, impactful points, communicated consistently, and delivered everything incredibly quickly. His pricing was very fair, and the final products genuinely exceeded my expectations."
Corina TotmanView LinkedIn profile"He showed me exactly how to present my experience in a way that actually stands out. He's super detail-oriented and made everything sound strong without losing my voice."
Kaden BranView LinkedIn profile"He took the time to walk through quick wins for my profile as well as real gaps and issues with my resume."
Matt DeOcampoView LinkedIn profile"He rewrote my entire resume and made suggestions on changes and inclusions for my LinkedIn page with instructions on how to implement them. He also explained what changes he made and why."
Karen SheaView LinkedIn profile"Mark is always available to chat and delivers great interview preparation knowledge and tips prior to your next meeting with hiring managers."
Brian ChapsView LinkedIn profile"His professionalism was above and beyond. I spoke to him that afternoon and had my resumes before I sat down for dinner."
Robert CazaresView LinkedIn profileResults in context
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